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Need opinions

PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:40 pm
by Johnson
Hey guys! So, I'm taking this playwrighting course (writing plays) and we've been asked to write a two-page scene about... anything. Now, I've already written my scene, but I want some opinions on it. Basically, I'm asking you guys to do me a major favour and read my scene and tell me what you think.

Tell me what you liked, tell me what you didn't like, tell me what stood out (regardless of whether you liked it or not) and where it fell behind. Please be honest and plain so I can learn something from what you have to say. Thanks so much!

LINK TO THE SCENE

PS: Once you've posted your thoughts I'll post my thoughts on what I wrote (explain briefly the process & explain what I intend for people to get from it).

PPS: <3

Re: Need opinions

PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:49 am
by Duck-Duck-Sheep
Will read once I am not asleep anymore like at the moment.